sociology final draft need asap

I have a rough draft and a completed final draft but im not happy with the final.  I need someone to clean up the Final draft.  I have very limited time so please dont accept if cant be completed.   I can attach rough and final draft..  Paper needs to be 3-5 pages not including cover and references

Professors comments

 

1. Introduce your paper with your previously crafted thesis statement. Weight: 15%

Your bulleted format makes your introduction very choppy. Work on the flow.

 

6. Writing / Support for ideas Weight: 5%

Feedback:

This is obviously a subject that you are very passionate about but be careful to jump to conclusions without providing evidence. You also need to make sure that you are using counterarguments to dispel the beliefs of your opponents. It will only serve to make your argument stronger.
 
8. Writing and Information Literacy / Integration of Sources Weight: 5%
Sources are partially integrated using effective techniques of quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing, using in-text citations.
9. Information Literacy / Crediting Sources in APA Weight: 5%
Several stats and years given without citation. Make sure you use the citations whenever you are using something from one of your references
10. Information Literacy / Research Weight: 5%
Could not evaluate last source because reference is incomplete
 
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